英语在线改错.10处.A terrible storm took place in a summer night.The

英语在线改错.10处.
A terrible storm took place in a summer night.The wind was so strong and many trees brought down.It was already evelven o'clock.Li Ming,he had gone to night school,was not still back and his parents were very anxious.Half an hour later the wind stopped,and it was still raining.Li Ming'parents were about to looking for him while he returned.Li Ming explained the wind has pushed over many big trees as well as telephone poles,blocked the roads and that the bridge had been washed away by the floods,so he had to find another way back.
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A terrible storm took place in a summer night.The wind was very strong and many trees brought down.It was already evelven o'clock.Li Ming had gone to night school and was not back and his parents were very anxious.Half an hour later the wind stopped,but it was still raining.Li Ming'parents were about to looking for him while he returned.Li Ming explained taht the wind had pushed over many big trees as well as telephone poles,blocked the roads and the bridge had been washed away by the floods,so he had to find another way back home.

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A terrible storm took place on a summer night. The wind was very strong and many trees brought down. It was already evelven o'clock. Li Ming had gone to night school ,so he wasn'tback ,and his parents were very anxious. Half an hour later the wind stopped,but it was still raining. Li Ming'parents were about to looking for him when he returned. Li Ming explained that the storm had pushed over many big trees as well as telephone lines,blocked the roads and the bridges had been washed away by the floods,so he had to find another way back home.

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1. 第一行的in → on
2、把第一行的and改为that
3. trees和brought中间加入were
4. 第三行的and → but
5、第四行的looking → look
6、第四行的while改为when
7、第四行的wind改为 storm
8、第五行的 poles改为 lines
9..第五行的 roads ...

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