高一英语短文改错(10处)One of the problems with cellphones and beepers

高一英语短文改错(10处)
One of the problems with cellphones and beepers are that they can be a major sou rce of distraction(分心).There is nothing bad than someone`s cellphone ringing in middle of something important.And if the people actual start talking,it`seven worse.This is why many a teachers are trying to ban cellphones and beepers from school.They said cellphones and beepers disrupt their classrooms and totally blow their student`s concentration(注意力).Worse still,if they go off during a test,they can really hurt someone`s grade.So lots of people disagree.Some kids have to keep in touth parents,friends.Rather than banning it,some kids should use them responsibly.
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One of the problems with cellphones and beepers are (改为is)that they can be a major source of distraction(分心).There is nothing bad(改为worse) than someone`s cellphone ringing in middle of something important. And if the people actual (改为actually)start talking, it`s even worse. This is why many a (去掉a)teachers are trying to ban cellphones and beepers from school.They said cellphones and beepers disrupt their classrooms and totally blow their student`s(改为students') concentration(注意力).Worse still,if they go off during a test,they can really hurt someone`s grade(改为grades).So(改为But) lots of people disagree.Some kids have to keep in touth(加上with) parents,friends.Rather than banning(改为ban) it(改为them),some kids should use them responsibly.

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女亭64 幼苗

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1.are改成is.
2.bad改成worse.
3.middle后加the.
4.actual改成actually.
5.a去掉.
6.student's改成students'.
7.grade改成grades.
8.so改成but.
9.touch后加with.
10.banning改成ban

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小偷偷偷偷东西 幼苗

共回答了22个问题 举报

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1.are改成is.
2.bad改成worse.
3.middle后加the.
4.actual改成actually.
5.a去掉.
6.student's改成students'.
7.grade改成grades.
8.so改成but.
9.touch后加with.
10.banning改成ban...

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