看一下我写的英语对吗"Cameron hurry up,the games start fight now."The s

"Cameron hurry up,the games start fight now."The soccer's coach in a loud voice over the sportground.
改"Cameron,hurry.The games start right now!" shouted the soccer's coach over the sportsground.
"Karment fast,did you hear that what the coach said?(或者是did you hear the sound from the coach)Cameron had talking in low,to his sister twin.
改"Karment,be quick.Did you hear what the coach said?" Cameron said to his twin sister in a low voice.
A few weeks ago,Karment asked cameron"Why I'm always been outside of the sportground?
I hear that from the coach,you're in a girl
改A few weeks ago,Karment asked cameron "Why have I always been outside of the sportground?
From the coach,I hear that you're in a girl team.
这个队不就是个男女组合搭配在一起的联队吗?那不是意味着女孩和男孩一起组队比赛的吗?
求会说一口流利英语人士帮我解决困难
Isn't the team the one that boys and girls are in the same team?Doesn't it mean that the boys and the girls make a team to compete together?

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"Cameron ，hurry up，the football match is about to begin!"The coach says with a loud voice on the playgroud.
"Karment ，be quick，did you hear what the coach said?“Cameron talks to his twin sister ...

太中式英语了
我改了几句
"Cameron hurry up, the game is starting right now." the coach said in a loud voice
"karment, did you hear what the coach said?" Cameron whispers to his twin sister.
A few...