看下我写的英语句子有没有语病in my opinion,the best teachers in our life ar

看下我写的英语句子有没有语病
in my opinion,the best teachers in our life are our parents who teach us most basic thing,such as run,speak and write,which influence greatly in our life.
the parents have less knowledge than that of professor
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火花_放手 花朵

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asic thing 改成:
basic things
such as +名词
run可以做名词,没问题,
speak 可以用speaking
write 可以用writing
influence 需要改为influence us
in our life 改为in our lives.
the parents 不要用the ,the 是限定词,这里泛指,所以不用the,改为our parents
that of professor改为 those professores,改为复数形式,不仅仅指一个,也不能借用一个来表达.

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是than those of professores 吗

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如果是这样子改为those of professors,需要在文章中有上下文,those代指上文提到的professors,但是你这里一个孤单的句子,直接用professors就可以了

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basic things influencent us

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1,In my opinion,best teachers in our life are our parents who teach us most basic things, such as running,speaking and writing,who influence greatly in our life.
2,Parents have less knowledge professor.

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such as run,speak and write 改为such as running,speaking and writing
the parents have less knowledge than that of professor 改为the parents than those who are professional have less knowledge .

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