帮忙纠错英语作文纠错online shopping is changing our way of shopping.On

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online shopping is changing our way of shopping.One day no one will go to shops at any more.Online shopping has several advantages.First,you can buy anything on the Internet at any time.Second,Online shopping is easy.So online shopping isn't spend lots of time.Third,online shopping can save money.
But online shopping can't see the product have less fun.And paying over the Internet isn't always safe.
amondd 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

qqscca 幼苗

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1.One day no one will go to shops any more.这里没有at
2.So online shopping doesn't spend lots of time.这里spend是动词,所以不用isn't而用doesn't
3.But we can't see the product from online shops and it is less fun.你的原句出现两个动词see和have,语法错误.
基本上就是这样了,已经帮您改正.

1年前

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心宇轩 幼苗

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Online shopping is changing the way we do our shopping. There will come a day when we don't need to go to shops anymore. Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can buy anything on the inte...

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yygu_111 幼苗

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One day no one will go to shops (at)any more. 这里没有at
So online shopping doesn't spend lots of time. 这里spend是动词,所以不用isn't而用doesn't
But we can't see the product from online shops and it is les...

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WSaa人 幼苗

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很好嘛 哪错啦

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