英语作文纠错英语作文：以生活方式为题.so you see,i'm unhealthy.i don't like veg
英语作文纠错
英语作文：以生活方式为题.
so you see,i'm unhealthy.i don't like vegetables at all.i never exercise.but i want to get good p.e.grades.who can helps me with my health.
my p.e.teache say,we need drink water or milk every day,and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week .it is good for our health.as for sleeping.we must sleep 8 hours every night.exercise is interesting.if we want to be strong,we need exercise every morning.by the way.you can be clever and strong.
英语作文：以生活方式为题.
so you see,i'm unhealthy.i don't like vegetables at all.i never exercise.but i want to get good p.e.grades.who can helps me with my health.
my p.e.teache say,we need drink water or milk every day,and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week .it is good for our health.as for sleeping.we must sleep 8 hours every night.exercise is interesting.if we want to be strong,we need exercise every morning.by the way.you can be clever and strong.
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(As) you (may) see,I'm unhealthy.I don't like vegetables at all.I never exercise.But I want to get good P.E.grades.Who can (help) me with my health(?)
My P.E.teacher (says),we need drink water or milk every day,and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week.It is good for our health.As for sleeping,we must sleep (at least) 8 hours every night.Exercise is interesting.If we want to be strong,we need exercise every morning.(In) (this) way,we can be clever and (stronger).
(As) you (may) see,I'm unhealthy.I don't like vegetables at all.I never exercise.But I want to get good P.E.grades.Who can (help) me with my health(?)
My P.E.teacher (says),we need drink water or milk every day,and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week.It is good for our health.As for sleeping,we must sleep (at least) 8 hours every night.Exercise is interesting.If we want to be strong,we need exercise every morning.(In) (this) way,we can be clever and (stronger).
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