英语作文 纠错 有高级词汇能用上的也帮忙说下
英语作文 纠错 有高级词汇能用上的也帮忙说下
The Spring Festival is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home. Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and easily.Finaly the fare is low. The boys said that we should travel some places. If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizons.
However the boys said the girls' idea is not great , because we can't go through the naturl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea is too expensive and is not easy to get.
Personly ,I'd like to stay at home . Because the weather is so bad . I'm afraid of the cold wind . I think the home is the best place to stay . I can do something , like doing homework , watching TV , drawing...
The Spring Festival is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home. Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and easily.Finaly the fare is low. The boys said that we should travel some places. If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizons.
However the boys said the girls' idea is not great , because we can't go through the naturl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea is too expensive and is not easy to get.
Personly ,I'd like to stay at home . Because the weather is so bad . I'm afraid of the cold wind . I think the home is the best place to stay . I can do something , like doing homework , watching TV , drawing...
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The Spring Festival is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home.Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and COZY.FinalLy,the fare is low.The boys said that we should travel some places.If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizon.
However the boys said the girls' idea WAS not great ,because we COULDN;T go through the naturAl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea WAS too expensive and WAS not easy to PUT INTO PRACTICE.
PersonlLy ,I'd like to stay at home .Because the weather is so bad .I'm afraid of the cold wind .I think the home is the best place to stay .I can do something ,like doing homework ,watching TV ,drawing...
The girs think we should stay at home.Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and COZY.FinalLy,the fare is low.The boys said that we should travel some places.If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizon.
However the boys said the girls' idea WAS not great ,because we COULDN;T go through the naturAl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea WAS too expensive and WAS not easy to PUT INTO PRACTICE.
PersonlLy ,I'd like to stay at home .Because the weather is so bad .I'm afraid of the cold wind .I think the home is the best place to stay .I can do something ,like doing homework ,watching TV ,drawing...
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