帮我改一下我的英语作文,有奖哦.

帮我改一下我的英语作文,有奖哦.
My fusion Last Sunday,I wasn 't too bad.
On Saturday,I got up at seven o' clock.My dad gave me ready breakfast.After
breakfast,I began to do my homework.It 's really boring.After I finished my
homework.I started to play computer games,It was very interesting.This
weekend is very good,and you?
要把他改写成80词左右的
冷酷到底1 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

角色的选择 幼苗

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My fusion Last Sunday,I wasn 't too bad.
On Saturday,I got up at seven o' clock.My dad gave me ready breakfast.After
breakfast,I began to do my homework.It 's really boring.After I finished my
homework.I started to play computer games,It was very interesting.This
weekend is very good,and you?
( I got up at 7 last saturday morning and started doing my boring homework after finishing the breadfast my dad cooked for me.Then I played games on my computer.I felt that's so interesting.
Its a good weedend for me though,what about yours?

1年前

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coolspider_82 幼苗

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感觉有种流水账,能不能有什么特别的事?比如和朋友出去什么的?

1年前

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矢量场 幼苗

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sadassssssssssssss

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