请帮我判下我的英语作文I'm Li Hua,the chief of the school art deaprtment

I'm Li Hua,the chief of the school art deapartment.Our school will hold an activity called the Art's Day .This activity include singing,painting and some games.I hope you can attend the activity and be a judge.Beacaus you are a good teacher and every student likes you.Please give me your reply soon.
这个是我改好的,主要改了 单词拼写错误,语法错误,漏冠词 等.你比较一下吧.