帮忙看看这段话有没有语法错误I'm writing for an permission that I wish to m

I'm writing an application that I wish to move into a new room,a single room,next term.
During the past year,I live in this room,the disharmony has emerged one after another.For one thing,I find it very difficult to work and study there because my roommate always held parties in our room and invited vastly friends to join in it.For another,they frequently took my things without my permission.The man who is unable to comply with the basic moral rules isn't accepted by me,though I am not a stingy person.
I submit,therefore,an application for changing a dorm.I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.Thanks.
我很认真地给你修改过了,请核对.你是申请换宿舍,application更适合.有的地方句式、标点、单词单复数都有改动.最后加Thanks 表示礼貌会更好.

I'm writing for a permission that I can move into a new room next term, which is a single room
During the past year when I lived in this room, the disharmony has emerged one after another. For ...