求英语大神帮我看一下下面这段话!如果有语法错误或者不符合表达规范的请指出谢谢!能再帮忙润色一下的更好,【I have b

求英语大神帮我看一下下面这段话!如果有语法错误或者不符合表达规范的请指出谢谢!能再帮忙润色一下的更好,【I have been envisioning the scene over and over again that I stand in the seremony hall,pledging that I am going to undertake the responsibilities to my family and my country.However,when i am actually standing here,words fail me.】
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平淡清新 幼苗

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I have been envisioning the scene over and over again,of which i stood in the ceremony hall and pledging that i would undertake the responsibilities for my family and my homeland.Howeven,words fail me...

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感觉通顺好多！！多谢大神^W^

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不客气，才发现however打错了，不好意思

alice_2006_alice 幼苗

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over and over again 后面的动词都改为过去式，因为你语境是表达一种虚拟的，非现实的。
stand - stood
i am going - i was going
to - of
my country - 可以省略
word fail me 是要表达什么意思？words fail me是心情无法用语言表达的意思，错了吗？my country...

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看见划时代反抗机 幼苗

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again that 改为again, which 。最后一句不是太明白

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