求英语大神帮看下这两篇小日记语法错误和用词错误

求英语大神帮看下这两篇小日记语法错误和用词错误
【1】:
Today is fun day , i'm very happy,i learn english for long time,some people think of english is very boring and difficult,but i'm not,english is intereing for me,at before learn english,i can't it,so i can't speak it, with my foreigner friend, i'm sad,and i decide learn it, i hope i can speak it very well,i wish my dream can come true ,too. 【2】
Today is a funny day . i'm very happy,i have learnt english for a long time.some people think english is very boring and difficult,but i don't.english is intereing for me.before learning english,i didn't know anything about it,so i couldn't speak english with my foreign friends. i was sad,and i decided to learn it. i hope i can speak it very well and my dream come true.
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辰晨混蛋 春芽

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is a fun day. day是可数的

I have learnt 学习很长一段时间 保持到现在应该用完成时

for a long time 固定用法

think of 改成think that应为of 后面跟词语,that 后面跟句子that可省略

I'm not 应该改为I don't(与think 对应 )

错别字 intereing 应该是interesting

before前面不需要at

i can't it 不知道你想表达什么。。。

I can't改成couldn't 因为是过去的事情,要用过去式

foreigner改为 foreign前者是名次后者是形容词

decide to learn:decide to do something

wish something do something or wish sb something固定用法

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