急！急！急！求英语大神帮我看一下这篇英语作文是什么程度的。

急！急！急！求英语大神帮我看一下这篇英语作文是什么程度的。
Recently, hazy weather has happened continuously in many places of our country. Not only have set back because of the fog haze, traffic and people are for the resulting respiratory disease. Fog haze because suffer harm of severe weather, air in the city, car exhaust, industrial emissions can results in the formation of haze. This weather is warning people to the importance of protecting the environment, if we can plant more trees in the city, when travel by driving less, factory waste gas is not drained off without processing, may be less severe weather such as fog haze appears many, or disappear. So let's take action, protect our survival homeland.