帮忙看下这两段话有没有语法错误,请指出,

It is a festival .
1.Many countries like(like+ving) spending it ,especially in Australia and New Zealand .
Many children are (take fun 去掉或改成having fun) very exciting and happy in this day.
There are many Jack Lanterns in the street.
It is (on +星期,on sunday) in October .
2.Many children say “Trick or treat.”
It means (that,可加可不加） if you don’t give us candies or other snacks.,（They,主语应该和前面一致）we will make trouble.(make trouble,固定搭配）
Master are always (be+ving) giving them some candies.
Then,children take their candies into the pockets (happily,可以加上,描述他们的状态）.
what's a funny custom.(感叹句,更有味道）

It is a festival .
1.Many countries like to spend it , especially for Australia and New Zealand .
Many children are taking fun in this day.
There are many Jack Lanterns on the street.

It is a festival .
1.Many countries like to celebrate it , especially for Australia and New Zealand .
Many children have fun on this day.
There are many Jack Lanterns in the street.
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这是对万圣节的描述啊，有几个错误：Many children are take fun in this day.把are去掉，再把in改成on；另外if you don’t give us把us 改成them。后面的Master are always give them some candies在Master 后加个S。此外第一句话感觉很奇怪，不地道Many countries like to s...

Many children say “Trick or treat

"Many children are take fun in this day."建议改为“Many children have a good time on this day.”
"It means if you don’t give us candies or other snacks. They will trouble."建议改为'It means that if you don'...