英语高手帮我找下这两段话里的语法错误并改正过来

英语高手帮我找下这两段话里的语法错误并改正过来
With the continuous development of science and technology,the computer used in various fields,and to people's lives has brought great convenience.This article is a passenger ticketing system,passenger transport companies in order to be convenient for daily management.
Based on network passenger ticketing system is a typical of the MIS,is a passenger transport companies Daily adapt ticket work the acute demand for management of the design and development of software systems,the development mainly include database establishment and maintenance and proscenium application program The development of the two,in the system requirements based on the analysis design and implementation of the basic information of input and management,ticketing information Add,modify,delete,and inquiry functions.
Passenger ticketing system is not an integral part of Passenger Transport Company,its content of passenger company managers and co-workers is critical,so Yi passenger ticketing system should provide users with sufficient information and efficient query means.But it has been the use of traditional manual approaches to ticket sales,which management exist Zhao several flaws such as:managing more Complex,then over time,will generate a lot of documents and data,which for find out,updating and maintenance have brought a lot of difficulties.
Ferry passenger ticketing system is a indispensable part of the company in many countries has been widely studied and applied.Overall,passenger ticketing system is through the centralized ticketing information,the company's management control.Ticket management system to achieve the modernization of the fundamental way is to make the asset information and systematic.The management system described in detail with Visual C # 2005 and SQL Server 2005 as a tool for the process of developing information management systems.System uses the latest Microsoft ADO.NET database access technology to achieve the foreground application and the background connection to the database,complete the system structure and the close integration of real life.
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生物咸遂 幼苗

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With the continuous development of science and technology,【the computer has been used in more and more fields,and has brought great convenience people's everyday life.】 【This article talks about a passenger ticketing system,by which passenger transport companies can use to be improve their daily management.】
【Based on the network passenger ticketing system,and also a typical of the MIS,a passenger transport company can use the system to daily adapt their ticket work to the accurate demand for customers as well as the management of design and development of software systems.】【 Development for the software system mainly includes database establishment and maintenance of the background application programs.】【 The development of the two,for the system requirements based on the analysis design and implementation of the basic information of input and management,ticketing information requires the Add,Modify,Delete,and Inquiry functions.】
Passenger ticketing system is not an integral part of Passenger Transport Company,but its role of passenger management for the company and co-workers is critical,so the passenger ticketing system should provide users with sufficient information and efficient query means.It has been the a long time to use traditional manual approaches for ticket sales,in which management is inefficient with several flaws such as:complexed daily management,work over time,a lot of documents and data,searching for particular information,and updating and maintenance has also brought in a lot of difficulties.】
【Ferry passenger ticketing system is an indispensable part of the company in many countries and has been widely studied and applied.】【Overall,passenger ticketing system functions through the centralized ticketing information,and the company's management control.Ticket management system aims to achieve the modernization of the fundamental operation and to make the asset information systematic.】【The management system is described in details with Visual C # 2005 and SQL Server 2005 as a tool for the process of developing information management systems.】【The System uses the latest Microsoft ADO.NET database and Access technology to achieve the foreground application and the background connection to the database,and to complete the system structure for a close integration of real life.】

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郁闷老二 幼苗

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随着科学技术的不断发展,计算机应用于各大领域,并给人们的生活带来了极大的便利。本文介绍的是一个客运售票系统,为了使客运公司的日常管理工作得到方便。
Along with the sustainable development of science and technology, the computer is applying in various fields, and it has b...

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pis2vh 幼苗

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楼主,你好,你的文章好像是中文直接用翻译工具翻译过来的,
即使改了,也无法使用。

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