【急】改错My family has got a new computer recently.That's the ve
【急】改错My family has got a new computer recently.That's the very thing trouble me.I don't like it ,though it has a program that lets my parents to control how much time I spentd on the computer .When my time is up ,the computer turns on.Now I can't play games as often as I used to.The program also keeps all websites I visit,and my parents can see it any time they like.Now I couldn't do whatever I like on the computer.Instead,my parents think the program is so a good idea that they also introduced it to their friends.
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My family has got a new computer recently.That's the very thing (trouble改成troubling) me.I don't like it,(though改成because) it has a program that lets my parents (去掉to) control how much time I (spent改成spend) on the computer.When my time is up,the computer turns (on改成off).Now I can't play games as often as I used to.The program also keeps all (加入the) websites I visit,and my parents can see (it改成them) any time they like.Now I (couldn't改成can't) do whatever I like on the computer.(Instead改成However),my parents think the program is (so改成such) a good idea that they also introduced it to their friends.
楼主打字有个别错误哦.
My family has got a new computer recently.That's the very thing (trouble改成troubling) me.I don't like it,(though改成because) it has a program that lets my parents (去掉to) control how much time I (spent改成spend) on the computer.When my time is up,the computer turns (on改成off).Now I can't play games as often as I used to.The program also keeps all (加入the) websites I visit,and my parents can see (it改成them) any time they like.Now I (couldn't改成can't) do whatever I like on the computer.(Instead改成However),my parents think the program is (so改成such) a good idea that they also introduced it to their friends.
楼主打字有个别错误哦.
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