急求！！！高三英语改错！！30分钟内要！！！Today ,Jack and I went to the countrys

急求！！！高三英语改错！！30分钟内要！！！Today ,Jack and I went to the countryside by the bus for the Strawberry -picking Festival .It starts at 8:00 nin the morning .After the organizer introduced the rules of the festival ,we led into the strawberry garden by some girls .Whine walking along the road ,we saw beautiful flowers and heard the birds sang .The air was much clean than that in the city when yea live .During the festival ,we enjoyed sweet strawberry or watched some exciting performances.At about 5:00 p.m.,we had to say goodbye for the garden .Jack and I enjoyed us and hoped to visit there again .How an unforgivable experience