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I was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmate of mine.l like her so much that I want her to be my girlfriend.But I am a failed student in grade 4 middle school.I decided to study hard but I couldn't stop missing her beauty,what should I do?I need your help~!
ANSWER:
I think that if you really like the girl you should find a chance to tell her .Judging from your description to the girl ,I can imagine that girl must be very beautiful.In my opinion there must be many boys like you admire her.Maybe the girl doesn't have boy friend now but that doesn't mean that she will have enough time to wait for yo to improve your study and then express your adore to her.Now,I give you some advice
1、 the first thing you must do is to tell her that you love and at the same time you should make a promise that you will study hard in future
2、the second thing is that you should try your best to study hard wo improve your marks
3、let her konw that you love her by no means only beacause of her beautiful.you should treasure her after you make friend
with her
Now,don't wait any more.have a try

It seems that your English writing is not bad.You must be a junior student,are't you?
In your sentences,spell a word wronly."classmate"but not"classmite"
Besides,the sentences are quite good.I...

I've modified your passage and mark changes with "[]".
[I'm] deeply attracted by [a girl who] is [my classmate]. I love her so much and [want her to] be my girlfriend. I'm not a very [good at stu...

i was deeply attracted 'by' a girl---to
classmite---classmate
'want to' her to be my girlfriend---want
i couldn't stop 'the missing of 'her beauty---thinking of
i want 'tostudy '----to...

“classmite”i think you just tpye it wrong,it should be"classmate"
"i want to her to be my girlfriend."you should use "i want her to be my girlfriend"
"i couldn't stop the missing of her beauty...

你第一行第十一个单词拼错，应该是“classmate”。第一行最后应该是“I want her to be my girl friend”。后面是那句可以改成“But I am a poor middle school student in grade 4”。第三行刚开头应该改成“couldn’t stop missing her beauty”。
回答：I think you shoul...

I was deeply attracted by a girl who is a classmate of mine.I like her so much,I want her to be my girlfriend but I am a failed student in grade 4 middle school.I want to study hard but I couldn't sto...