有没有文法错误?People may think it just insect why you need to afra

有没有文法错误?
People may think it just insect why you need to afraid for .It’s simply that the only thing to fear is fear itself .In fact ,I’m not afraid of being afraid of insects.The reason why I am afraid for the insect,is about their wings,whenever they fly to me,I feel it extremely disgusting
I want to saying( say) an example about my terrible experience.It’s happened when I am in my primary school .At that day My parents with me go to the park.I was very happy until I felt something was moving on my leg.It’s a insect and flew into my head when I try to get rid of it .This is really terrible for me.You can feel something climb on your skin,not only feeling itch,but also feel extremely uncomfortable.
For my instant,I think insect is really dirty,especially cockroach,they always stay around the rubbishes and they can infect the disease also.That’s the reason why people don’t like them.
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wolf_dancing 春芽

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错误太多,无法纠正,纯汉语式作文.语法错误相当的多

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關於那一方面.. 是結構問題還是其他... 請明示

郁闷老二 幼苗

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是初中生吧? 感觉同样的内容可以精简一下.
i want to say 改成 i'd like to share a terriable expericence...那些文法上有没有出錯呢?说句不好听的就是太罗嗦了.我改了第一段,你可以自己该第二段: If you ask me why don’t I like insect, the reason is quite simple, ...

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过客1986 幼苗

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把汉语贴出来吧
人们可能会认为它只是昆虫为什么你需要要担心,只是因为唯一要恐惧的就是恐惧本身。事实上,我并不害怕被害怕昆虫。为什么我害怕昆虫是关于他们的翅膀,无论何时,当它们飞到我时,我感觉它极其厌恶
软件翻译的??? 這是我自己作的..不是用软件翻译的汉语是你做的,我用软件给你还原的。要不我哪来的汉语。 英语是用软件翻译的這是你自己以前的模式... 並不代表每個人都是這樣....

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