英语改错..Last Sunday I went shopping with my wife by the car.We
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Last Sunday I went shopping with my wife by the car.We had large quantities of things to buy.We drove to the centre of the city,which we often buy our things,and stopped our car in front of a shop.An hour later,we came back to my car.But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door.However,we asked a policeman for help,who was glad to help us.After a few minute,he got the door open.Just then,a man came up,shoutde angrily,"How are you doing with my car?"Very surprised,we went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then?We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.
Last Sunday I went shopping with my wife by the car.We had large quantities of things to buy.We drove to the centre of the city,which we often buy our things,and stopped our car in front of a shop.An hour later,we came back to my car.But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door.However,we asked a policeman for help,who was glad to help us.After a few minute,he got the door open.Just then,a man came up,shoutde angrily,"How are you doing with my car?"Very surprised,we went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then?We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.
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Last Sunday I went shopping with my wife by the car(去the或把by改为in）.We had large quantities of things to buy.We drove to the centre of the city, which（改为where) we often buy our things,and stopped our car in front of a shop.An hour later,we came back to my(改为our) car.But it was strangely(改为strange） that we couldn't open the door.However（改为Then),we asked a policeman for help,who was glad to help us.After a few minute(改为minutes),he got the door open.Just then,a man came up,shouted angrily,"How(改为What） are you doing with my car?"Very surprised（改为surprisedly) ,we went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then?We had to speak (改为say)sorry to the man again and again.
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Last Sunday I went shopping with my wife by the car(去the或把by改为in）.We had large quantities of things to buy.We drove to the centre of the city, which（改为where) we often buy our things,and stopped our car in front of a shop.An hour later,we came back to my(改为our) car.But it was strangely(改为strange） that we couldn't open the door.However（改为Then),we asked a policeman for help,who was glad to help us.After a few minute(改为minutes),he got the door open.Just then,a man came up,shouted (改为shouting) angrily,"How(改为What） are you doing with my car?"Very surprised（改为surprisedly) ,we went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then?We had to speak (改为say)sorry to the man again and again.
chenlin886 幼苗
共回答了2个问题 举报
第二行的which改为where
第二行的and后加we
strangely改为strange
However改为therefor
minute改为minutes
第五行how改为what
speak改为sorry
第二行的and后加we
strangely改为strange
However改为therefor
minute改为minutes
第五行how改为what
speak改为sorry
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