英语改错白度知道It was very fine while Igot up early last Sunday mor

英语改错白度知道
It was very fine while Igot up early last Sunday morning so I decided to go for a walk and took some phoros in the beautiful country.After breakfast Icarried my camera with me and set off.Everything went smooth.Ienjoyed my trip so much that I didn't realize the weather had been turned bad.Ibegan to run and it was too late.Iwas caught by the rain and was wet through.Ikept on running until Igey to a bus stop.Istood there waiting a long time for the bus,shivering with cold.Shortly before Igot home,Ihad high fever,which made me stay in bed for a whole week!谢谢帮忙改出十个错误,紧急!
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第一行:while改成when
第二行:phoros改成photos
第三行:逻辑好混乱.就算再专注,也不可能不发觉天气的变化啊.
第四行:去掉been
第四行:第一个and改成but
第五行:gey改成get
Istood there waiting a long time for the bus,shivering with cold.这句话动词分词作短语重复太多,可以写成:I stood shivering with cold there.
第六行:before改成after
第六行:had后面加一个a
第六行:which前那个逗号可以去掉.这里用限定性定语从句就好

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