英语改错When I was a boy,I had to get up in six every morning.My

英语改错
When I was a boy,I had to get up in six every morning.My dad had some chickens.I had to feed with them every morning and then I had to walk to school with my little sister.In the evening,we couldn't watch TV because there wasn't some.We had some good time.On Sundays we could go outside and our parents needn't to worry about us.There won't so many cars on the roads then,but the streets were safe to play in.And there was not many thieves in those days.We had to work hard and we weren't able to bought all those things in the shops today.Life was hardly,but it was more simple and people wew happier.I don't think I'd like to young today.
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8uiec 幼苗

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I had to feed them with corns every morning
第三行because there wasn't anything to see
第四行our parents didn't need to worry about us.there were not so many cars……
第五行but it was safe to play on the street
倒数第二行life was hard but it was more simple and people were happier.I don't think 后面一句错了因为我实在没理解你最后一句是什么意思所以就没能帮你改了

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恐龙蛋de 幼苗

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太多错了。标点符号和断句也有问题。

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风问 幼苗

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(1)in 改为at
(2)with改为for

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