谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,
谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,
(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess that she had made her fingers was covered with pastry.
(2)After putting the cake in the oven,i forgot all about it.when two hours had passed,i smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,i found it full of smoke.
(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess that she had made her fingers was covered with pastry.
(2)After putting the cake in the oven,i forgot all about it.when two hours had passed,i smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,i found it full of smoke.
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(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess she found that she had made her fingers covered with pastry.
(2) i forgot all about it after putting the cake in the oven .almost when two hours had passed,i smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,i found it full of smoke
(2) i forgot all about it after putting the cake in the oven .almost when two hours had passed,i smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,i found it full of smoke
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