求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文（CET4） 顺便打一下分数

求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文（CET4） 顺便打一下分数
1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用；
2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题；
3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义.
Limiting the use of disposable plastic bags
Disposable plastic bags once used in everywhere,people often use it to taking goods.In supermarket and store,sales give us disposable plastic bags bring goods.
The use of disposable plastic bags brings more problems to us.First of all,disposable plastic bags will break the environment where we lived.Second,produce disposable plastic bags need more resource that will waste lots of resource.
In my opinion,limiting the use of disposable plastic bags is essential to us.First,limiting the use of disposable plastic bags could protect the environment we lived.Second,limiting the use of disposable plastic bags could decrease the waste of resource.Only in this way,can we live in a green world.