6级英语作文求高手修改和大概分数
6级英语作文求高手修改和大概分数
Normally,it is nothing to purchase a train ticket.But,when it comes to the Spring Festival,there is no more difficult than purchasing a ticket.In order to avoid someone who purchases several tickets and sells tickets with a high price,the real-name train ticket purchase system launched.A multitude of people agree with this idea because it solve the problem that tickets are all in someone's hand.It's much easier for them to purchase train tickets.It's not exaggerating that the launch of the real-name train ticket purchase system give a lesson to the one who sells train tickets in a high price.
Normally,it is nothing to purchase a train ticket.But,when it comes to the Spring Festival,there is no more difficult than purchasing a ticket.In order to avoid someone who purchases several tickets and sells tickets with a high price,the real-name train ticket purchase system launched.A multitude of people agree with this idea because it solve the problem that tickets are all in someone's hand.It's much easier for them to purchase train tickets.It's not exaggerating that the launch of the real-name train ticket purchase system give a lesson to the one who sells train tickets in a high price.
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水平有限,只能改改病句,还没达到打分的水平,望理解.话说没看到你的作文啊~
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Moreover,the train tickets brought with an ID card have the information which is more dangerous than you can imagine if it let out. From my own perspective,I firmly support that the launch of the real-name train ticket purchase system do more good than harm. 追问打不完，这是剩下的
以下几个地方建议修改： 1.it is nothing to purchase a train ticket 改为：it is easy to... 2.there is no more difficult than 改为：there is nothing more difficult than 3.所有with a high price/in a high price 全改为：at a high price 4.give a lesson to the one who sells train tickets 改为：give a lesson to the ones who sell... 5. Moreover,the train tickets brought with an ID card 改为：However, ... 只是我的个人意见，有不理解的地方可以继续追问哈
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