英语改错,急 Thank you for offering me school fees.I really apprec

英语改错,急 Thank you for offering me school fees.I really appreciate your kind and genero...
英语改错,急
Thank you for offering me school fees.I really appreciate your kind and generosity .Without your help ,i couldn't enjoy awonderful life in the university .Now iam getting on quite good with my life and studies .I am studying hard to acquire an abundant knowledge of english ,that is my major .I'm making progresses every day .Only by working hard can i help with those in need .What's more ,I've made up mind to go back to my hometown before graduation and devote myself to make it more prosperous and beautify .
⊥19[1/3]最后一段 Words seemed to fair me when i try once more to express my th⊥19[2/3]anks for you .I'LL keep my promise and live up to your expectation ⊥19[3/3].
灰色之瞳 1年前 已收到7个回答 举报

再一次的一次 幼苗

共回答了18个问题采纳率:94.4% 举报

按顺序:
kind→kindness,university前的the去掉,abundant前的an去掉,progress一般不用复数,before改为after.fair改为fail
字数有限,楼主有问题可以继续追问~

1年前

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东东真诚 幼苗

共回答了14个问题采纳率:78.6% 举报

我们也在考~“同道中人”啊、哈哈

1年前

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離人心上秋 幼苗

共回答了19个问题采纳率:78.9% 举报

楼主你也是云南的吧…

1年前

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touchyou2000cn 幼苗

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我也在考试!

1年前

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wyjoan 幼苗

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your kindness . the wonderful life /getting on quite well /abundant knowledge of English ,which is / making progress /help those in need . made up mind going back /after graduation / beautiful .

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水易人 幼苗

共回答了79个问题 举报

kindness and generosity
enjoy wonderful life in the university .
acquire anabundant knowledge of english ...
I've made up mind to go back to my hometown after graduation ...

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kingwen1st 幼苗

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make/making

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