英语改错急1.2012 邯郸一模 In the winter vacation,I paid a visit a mou

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1.2012 邯郸一模 In the winter vacation,I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan.No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes.It was far better than I had been expected.Now every family can drink cleanly running water.The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more.Firewood is no longer used for cooking.Marsh gas,a new cheap clean energy,make it very convenient to cook and light.As all the families have color TV set,they can enjoy plays at home.It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school.I hope the mountain village will become better and better.
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In the winter vacation,I paid a visit (加to)a mountain village in a suburb of Handan.No sooner had I got off the bus when(改为than) I was greatly surprising(改为surprised) to see all the changes.It was far better than I had been(去掉been) expected.Now every family can drink cleanly(改为clean) running water.The villagers needn’t carry water himself(改为themselves) any more.Firewood is no longer used for cooking.Marsh gas,a new cheap clean energy,make(改为makes) it very convenient to cook and light.As all the families have color TV set(改为sets),they can enjoy plays at home.It(改为What) impressed me most was that the best building in a(改为the) village was the school.I hope the mountain village will become better and better.

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visit后面加to,of改成in,when改成than, surprising改成surprised, been去掉,
cleanly改成clean,himself改成themselves, impressed前面那个it改成what, village前面那个a改成the,
由于不晓得你的顺序是怎么的,所以没有给出正确的那个,你把其他的该了,剩下那排就是正确的。希...

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爱上玉米馒头 幼苗

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(由于字体没法做相应的变化,所以”改错“的地方是和前后的单词“保持了一定的距离”。望大家耐心看。) In the winter vacation, I paid a visit to a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus than I was gre...

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In the winter vacation, I paid a visit 【 to 】a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus 【 when--- than 】 I was greatly 【surprising-- surprised 】 to se...

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In the winter vacation, I paid a visit (to)a mountain village in (the) suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly (surprised) to see all the changes. It was far better than I...

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In winter vacation, I paid a visit to a mountain village in the suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprised to see all the changes. It was far better than I had bee...

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