急——————-英语 改错——————急拜托各位了 3Q

急——————-英语 改错——————急拜托各位了 3Q
One afternoon,when I was on my way home,the weather changed sudden.Dark( 1 )clouds were gathered.I began to feel worried about because I didn't have a raincoat( 2 )or an umbrella with me.That soon started to rain.Just as I was hurrying home,I heard( 3 )someone called me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that it was Liu Wei,a( 4 )neighbor of my.He offered to share her umbrella with me.We walked home together( 5 )happily.Without Liu Wei's help,I would become wet to the skin.How thankful I was( 6 )to his help and kindness!( 7 ) 括号表示一行,一共有10处.