英语作文求修改!FriendshipJuniorClass 14 Grade 2 Leo TanIt is a trut
英语作文求修改!
Friendship
JuniorClass 14 Grade 2 Leo Tan
It is a truth that any humanbeing can't live without friendship,but the meaning of friendship is differentfor each person.An old English saying is 'A friend in need is a friendindeed.'.I think a true friend may help you when you are in trouble,but everyonehas their own life and their own interests.We can't force anyone to help us tofight against our own destiny.Though it's good and warm for us to have otherhands when we are sad,disappointed,angry or blaming ourselves,but we can'tcount on our friends' help,isn't it right?
In my opinion,a friend is theperson who has the same interests as you and listens to your crazy wordspatiently.We are both normal and unknown,but we can dream together.Even ifthere's no one understand what I am interested in,he will also give hissincere advice to me.Maybe he is not popular or soft-spoken,but he surelygives you the most important spirit support invisibly.
Friendship is indispensable.Itgives you the most basic social need and helps to improve your own life.Butdon't take advantage of our friends.It is true that it's too difficult to findone or two true friends,but we can have many more common friends,can't we?
Friendship
JuniorClass 14 Grade 2 Leo Tan
It is a truth that any humanbeing can't live without friendship,but the meaning of friendship is differentfor each person.An old English saying is 'A friend in need is a friendindeed.'.I think a true friend may help you when you are in trouble,but everyonehas their own life and their own interests.We can't force anyone to help us tofight against our own destiny.Though it's good and warm for us to have otherhands when we are sad,disappointed,angry or blaming ourselves,but we can'tcount on our friends' help,isn't it right?
In my opinion,a friend is theperson who has the same interests as you and listens to your crazy wordspatiently.We are both normal and unknown,but we can dream together.Even ifthere's no one understand what I am interested in,he will also give hissincere advice to me.Maybe he is not popular or soft-spoken,but he surelygives you the most important spirit support invisibly.
Friendship is indispensable.Itgives you the most basic social need and helps to improve your own life.Butdon't take advantage of our friends.It is true that it's too difficult to findone or two true friends,but we can have many more common friends,can't we?
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1 but the meaning of friendship is different for each person."for"应该改为“to".
2 Though it's good and warm for us to have otherhands when we are sad,disappointed,angry or blaming ourselves,but we can'tcount on our friends' help,isn't it right?
此处though 和 but不可以一块用.though放在句首本身就有尽管...但是的意思.
3 n my opinion,a friend is the person 应该把the person改成a person
4 Even ifthere's no one understand what I am interested in,要把there's 去掉
5Itgives you the most basic social need and helps to improve your own life.improve是应该是提高的意思,把你的话mprove your own life翻译成中文就是提升你的生活,明显是病句.应该把life换成life quality
至于文章内容,这都是你自己的想法,我觉得我没法提供修改意见.
1 but the meaning of friendship is different for each person."for"应该改为“to".
2 Though it's good and warm for us to have otherhands when we are sad,disappointed,angry or blaming ourselves,but we can'tcount on our friends' help,isn't it right?
此处though 和 but不可以一块用.though放在句首本身就有尽管...但是的意思.
3 n my opinion,a friend is the person 应该把the person改成a person
4 Even ifthere's no one understand what I am interested in,要把there's 去掉
5Itgives you the most basic social need and helps to improve your own life.improve是应该是提高的意思,把你的话mprove your own life翻译成中文就是提升你的生活,明显是病句.应该把life换成life quality
至于文章内容,这都是你自己的想法,我觉得我没法提供修改意见.
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