英语作文求修改。请各位大侠帮忙啊

英语作文求修改。请各位大侠帮忙啊
题目：Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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With the technology booms fast, communication is easier than before. People get used to talk through the phone instead visit each other for many times, which plays an important part in daily life.
I strongly reckon that technology become a positive development.
For example, if I study abroad and far away from my parents it’s obvious that we can’t live together every day. But we can meet on the Internet by QQ. We can also talk over the phone. So, this must be attribute to modern technology.
However, in the same situation, if don’t have QQ or even telephone, I believe that both parents and children be sad because of less communication.
We don’t fear how long distance between one person and another, and we also don’t fear communication skills are poor. Nowadays new techonlogy has changed this fear. It has been wide used in every part of the world.
Taking into account all these factors, we can make a conclusion that the technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to talk or to interact at any time and anywhere in the world. Besides, people can also make new friends by this way to expand relationship circle and make life more convenient and joyful.