写了一篇英语作文,求修改、There is an old saying:“Happiness does not depe
写了一篇英语作文,求修改、
There is an old saying:“Happiness does not depend on wealth,rights and looks,but depends on you and everybody around you.” When we have some delicious food,we have to learn to show them with others.If a classmate don't happy,we can say some words to make he happy again.When I care for others,Ifeel happy.so care for others ,and you will get others care and friendships in return.
帮我看看，语句通不通顺、有没有单词写错 就可以了。
There is an old saying:“Happiness does not depend on wealth,rights and looks,but depends on you and everybody around you.” When we have some delicious food,we have to learn to show them with others.If a classmate don't happy,we can say some words to make he happy again.When I care for others,Ifeel happy.so care for others ,and you will get others care and friendships in return.
帮我看看，语句通不通顺、有没有单词写错 就可以了。
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There is an old saying: “Happiness does not depend on wealth, rights and looks, but depends on youself and everybody around you.” When you have some delicious food, you should learn to share with others.If a classmate of yours is unhappy, you need say some words to make him or her happy. In a word, when I care others,I feel happy. So, please care everybody around you ,and then you will get others' care and friendship in return.
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