英语改错...AS is known by all,nowadays the Internet is playing m

英语改错...
AS is known by all,nowadays the Internet is
playing more and more important part in our daily
life.On it,we can only read news at home and aborad
but also get so much information as possible
We are often send E-mails to out classmates or out
teachers or make telephone call to our families as well
as our friends.However,we can go to school on the net,
read different kinds of books and even teach myself English.
We can aso enjoy music ,watchhing sports and play computer
games on the net.We can do shopping even without leaving our homes
除了最后1行
每行都有错1个 我打错的字不算 只有1行对的
就是和改错题一样的...