一篇英语作文帮打分I am very interested in English because I think Eng

首先我声明 我也是个普通的大学生(英语专业)，我也不太懂你们初中的改卷标准，也不知道你是初几，下面是我对你的作文的评价; 1. 简单句太多了，如果你能适当的加入一两句复合句应该会增色许多 2.你用的基本都是一般现在时，初中不只学这个时态吧，现在完成时，一般过去时呢？3. I am very interested in English because I think English is very uesful.（As we all know,) China will be the host for 2008 Olympics, so we must talk with foreigner(s) in English. I find that the best way to learn English （well) is (to) speak English all the time .In this way, I can improve my listening and speaking.I often chat with a native speaker (who comes from a English speaking country)through the Internet to improve my oral English.There are also many other ways to learn English, like watching English movies (and) singing English songs. If you study hard enough, you'll find more good ways to learn English. 这就是小小的建议，难免有错误吧，我给你打分;10分

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watching English movies singing English songs.改为watching English movies and singing English songs.
整篇文章写的不错，只是读起来有点像拼凑的，...