谁能帮我纠正一下错误?(英语作文)

谁能帮我纠正一下错误?(英语作文)
What is the most important thing in our life?I think it is the happiness.Of course,our life may be boring and monotonous,but we should find meaningful things and things who make us happy in our life.Maybe some people will say,I never have any happy things,why is the world so unfair?But we should know,happiness actually is a simple thing.If we want it,we will find it.It is just everywhere.Remember,happiness consists incontentment.Why is one person always upset?Maybe because he is often dissatisfied.So please be satisfied,happiness will come around you.
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polaris4 幼苗

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What is the most important thing in our life? In my opinion, that is happiness. Of course, our life may be boring and monotonous, but we should find meaningful things which make us happy. Maybe someon...

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梦_蓝 幼苗

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and things who make us happy in our life
who 改成 what
I never have any happy things
any 改成 some (不是很确定)
why is the world so unfair
改成 why the world is so unfair
happiness c...

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小小女n 幼苗

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What is the most important thing in our life? I think it is happiness. but we should find something meaningful what make us happy in our life. I never have any happy things, why is the world so unfa...

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zzxhoo 幼苗

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What is the most important thing in our life? I think it is the happiness.
Of course, our life may be boring and monotonous,but we should find meaningful things and things what(不要用who) make us ha...

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superxuxuxu 幼苗

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什么是最重要的事在我们的生活中? 我认为它是幸福。 当然,我们的生活也许是乏味和单调的,但是我们应该发现使我们愉快在我们的生活中的意味深长的事和事。 可能某些人民为什么说,我是否不会有任何愉快的事,是世界很不合理的? 但是我们应该知道,幸福实际上是一件简单的事。 如果我们想要它,我们将发现它。 它在到处。记住,幸福包括incontentment。 一个人为什么总是让烦恼? 可能,因为他经常不满意。...

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