帮我纠正我的英语报告错误good morning everyone,i'm on duty today.it's my

good morning everyone,i'm on duty today.it's my pleasure to meet everyone.from now on,we are one famliy,i hope we can have a good time in these three years.now ,please allow me to introduce myself.my name is linjing,i'm 16 years old.i'm from No.2 middle school.in my spare time i like watching movies,playing tennis and in holidays i like traveling .
i have been to xiamen,shanghai and beijing .i think these cities are very beautiful.i like xiamen the best.the air in xiamen is very clean.and there are many beautiful sights.for example.gulangyu is one of the beautiful sights of xiamen .there are many old buildings,beaches with a lot of games there ,more and more people are coming.if you learn about gulangyu ,i can tell you .
that's all.thank you
嗯,比第一次的好多了.

读起来好别扭，像小学生写的。

the 2nd middle school playing tennisSo, I have been to (和上文"我尤其喜欢旅游"没有直接的因果关系, 不应该要这个so)i like xiaman the bestthere are many old buildings, beaches with a lot of games theremore and more people are comingthat's all