帮我修改下,顺便打分,15满分公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.Most Chine
帮我修改下,顺便打分,15满分
公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.
Most Chinese man are smoke,no matter they are working,chatting or waitting.Now most people have realized the harm of smoke,most of them have gave up smoke,but we could see some people smoking in public places before now wherever we went to.
Smoking in public places ,causing a series of problems.Firstly,that will make the people around you feel bored.Secondly,smoking in public places make the environment worse.In order to not affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoking in public places.
What is the meaning of ban smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effection way to reduce the number of smoking people.Secondly,it can keep others' not be affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment not be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places
公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.
Most Chinese man are smoke,no matter they are working,chatting or waitting.Now most people have realized the harm of smoke,most of them have gave up smoke,but we could see some people smoking in public places before now wherever we went to.
Smoking in public places ,causing a series of problems.Firstly,that will make the people around you feel bored.Secondly,smoking in public places make the environment worse.In order to not affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoking in public places.
What is the meaning of ban smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effection way to reduce the number of smoking people.Secondly,it can keep others' not be affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment not be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places
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Most people love smoking,no matter when they are working,chatting or waiting?
Now most people have realized the harm of smoke, and most of them have given up smoke,but we sitill can see some people smoking in public places all over the world.
Smoking in public places causes/produces a series of problems.
Firstly, smoking in public places will make the people around you feel bored.
Secondly, it will make the environment worse.
In order not to affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoke in public places.
What is the meaning of banning smoking in public places?
In my view,firstly,it is an effective way to reduce the number of smokers. Secondly,it can keep others from being affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment from being be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places.
小哥啊 语法错误太多了 最多给你8分啊
Now most people have realized the harm of smoke, and most of them have given up smoke,but we sitill can see some people smoking in public places all over the world.
Smoking in public places causes/produces a series of problems.
Firstly, smoking in public places will make the people around you feel bored.
Secondly, it will make the environment worse.
In order not to affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoke in public places.
What is the meaning of banning smoking in public places?
In my view,firstly,it is an effective way to reduce the number of smokers. Secondly,it can keep others from being affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment from being be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places.
小哥啊 语法错误太多了 最多给你8分啊
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