一段英语,帮我修改下,使之语法正确,语句通顺.
一段英语,帮我修改下,使之语法正确,语句通顺.
The main point of contention for me is that that technology helps us is much more than that technology takes from us,for example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics problems and promote the development of math and related areas.Computer can be applied to almost every areas and become one of the most important tools of people.
The main point of contention for me is that that technology helps us is much more than that technology takes from us,for example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics problems and promote the development of math and related areas.Computer can be applied to almost every areas and become one of the most important tools of people.
赞 h31230241 幼苗
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The main point of contention for me is that technology gives us more thingsthan it takes from us.For example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics problems and promote the development of math and related areas.Computer can be applied to almost every area and has become one of the most important tools that people use in life.
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aerodaniel 幼苗
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感觉逻辑上有些混乱，computer已经包括calculator了，你是想说computer的功能吗？还有一个问题是computer从我们身上带走了什么？没有比较，怎么知道利大于弊呢？这是我给你提的意见~~
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英语很好的同志拜托帮我看下下面文章对不对,帮我修改下,谢谢了
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你能帮帮他们吗