英语翻译是适合小学生的,准确的说是简略一点,也要带上翻译

Winter is my favourive season,you know?the weather in winter is very cold,and even rain hard and snow,some animals sleep all the winter ,such as snakes,tree leaves have been fell down by the strong wind .I thing the winter is the most beautiful saeson,everywhere is full of snow,and I can make little snowy perpons with my good friends,and we also can play more games with snow,the snow give us so much happiness,it make me feel relaxed and warm all the winter.译文：冬天是我最喜欢的季节,你知道吗?冬天很冷,甚至会下大雨和大雪,一些动物整个冬天都在冬眠,例如蛇,树叶被大风吹落.同时我认为冬天是最美的季节,处处都布满雪花,我和好伙伴们一起堆雪人,还有许多和雪有关的有趣游戏,冬天的雪给我们带来很多快乐,让整个冬天使我感到放松和温暖.写得可以吗?