修改下面的英语作文,语法哪里错了,麻烦帮我改一下,
修改下面的英语作文,语法哪里错了,麻烦帮我改一下,
Welcome to the Yunnan University of Nationalities Yuhua Campus.I was the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design 3 class Ann.I'm 19 years old.I'm from Yunna of HongHe.I like playing volleyball and play computer games.I was our class league brach secretary.
Now,we are in place is new campus,Yuhua Campus scenery is very beautiful.Look,there is our campus Yuhua lake,another is a row of cherry trees.Since our campus is National University,all the buildings are national style.
The campus is full of green,fresh air,beautiful environment,many students are like here,including me.This is our beautiful campus ,thank you for your coming.
I hope we can become better friends and wish you good health ,happy every day.
Welcome to the Yunnan University of Nationalities Yuhua Campus.I was the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design 3 class Ann.I'm 19 years old.I'm from Yunna of HongHe.I like playing volleyball and play computer games.I was our class league brach secretary.
Now,we are in place is new campus,Yuhua Campus scenery is very beautiful.Look,there is our campus Yuhua lake,another is a row of cherry trees.Since our campus is National University,all the buildings are national style.
The campus is full of green,fresh air,beautiful environment,many students are like here,including me.This is our beautiful campus ,thank you for your coming.
I hope we can become better friends and wish you good health ,happy every day.
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I was the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design 3 class Ann.
你以前是那的学生?I am a student of the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design class 3, Ann.
I'm from HongHe of Yunnan province.
是云南吧.
I like playing volleyball and play computer games.
后面也是喜欢吧,也要ing啊.I like playing volleyball and playing computer games.
we are in place is new campus
where we are in the place is new campus.
all the buildings are national style.
all the buildings are in the national style.
many students are like here,
神马.many students like here
I hope we can become better friends
比较什么==I hope we can become good friends
你以前是那的学生?I am a student of the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design class 3, Ann.
I'm from HongHe of Yunnan province.
是云南吧.
I like playing volleyball and play computer games.
后面也是喜欢吧,也要ing啊.I like playing volleyball and playing computer games.
we are in place is new campus
where we are in the place is new campus.
all the buildings are national style.
all the buildings are in the national style.
many students are like here,
神马.many students like here
I hope we can become better friends
比较什么==I hope we can become good friends
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