各位英语高手帮我评价一下我的考研作文
各位英语高手帮我评价一下我的考研作文
题目是你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南创北
关于合作的,字数200字
1 满分20得几分
2 有什么语法,逻辑等错误谢谢
As is illustrated in the picture, two crippled person thrown their crutch and traveled around the world. Accordingly, this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: if one cannot do something well, the cooperation would make great effect.
To begin with, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that since we live in a high-speed lifestyle, we may encounter a huge amount of plights. Sometimes we would be in trouble if no one helps us.
Furthermore, we should offer some help when others confront dilemma.
Last but not least, the personal competency alone is not sufficient, for example, I have played a gun game called time crisis hardly for 2 years. I only can play a very low score in shanghai. But hongkong players got really terrible score for they have a team. this is the power of the cooperation.
Judging from what have argued above, we should not wean ourselves to the cooperation. Specially, we should take a positive attitude to the help of others. I believe in this way the relationship between people will be more harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in.