改错(满分10分)Dear sir,I graduated this year and wanted to

改错(满分10分)
Dear sir,
I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be success, but finally I
failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot
weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself someone who
couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I found a company that was
advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for details. I wanted to make a move, and I was always
disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward to receive your reply.
Yours
Li Ming
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Dear sir,
I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be ^ success, but eventually
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I failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the
Because about
hot weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself
knew myself后加as
someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I
alone capable
found a company that was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for details. I wanted
to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward
but
to receive your reply.
receiving

1年前

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