短文改错,Dear Sir or MadamYesterday I traveled on the 8:00 a.m.t

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Dear Sir or Madam
Yesterday I traveled on the 8:00 a.m.train from Glasgow to Lodon King’s Cross and I was quite angry with their company.
The train didn’t come in time and it was 40 minutes late when it left for Glasgow.A man at the station said sorry to us,he didn’t give us any explanations for the delay.We then had futher delays on the way and wait another 30 minutes.As result,Imissed my plane.
What’s more ,the service was very poor.The tirp took near 5 hours.Unlucky,we could buy nothing but drinks on the train.Worst of all,the air-conditioning went wrongly and it got terribly hot on the train.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
David Robertson
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