短文改错Helen was in her twenty and her eyes were not that well,

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Helen was in her (twenty改成twenties) and her eyes were not that (well改成good).That was (beacuse改成why) she usually wore glasses.However,every time (去掉when) she went out with a young man,she never wore her glasses.Helen often (takes改成took) her glasses off when he came to take her out.When she came home again and he left,she put (it改成them) on.Full of curiosity,her mother said one day,''Why not (去掉to) wear your glasses when you (加入are) with Jim?He takes you to beautiful places (by his去掉his 或 by his改成in his) car,but you can't see anything clearly." "Oh," said Helen,"without glasses I look prettier to Jim and he looks better to me (either改成too)."
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Helen was in her twenty(改为twenties) and(改为but) her eyes were nor(not) that well(改为good). That was beacuse she usually wore glasses. However, every time when(when去掉) she went out with a young man, she ...

Helen was in her twenty (TWENTIES) and her eyes were nor (NOT) that well (GOOD). That was beacuse (WHY) she usually wore glasses. However, every time when she went out with a young man, she never wore...

with a young man, she never wore her glasses. Helen ofent takes her glasses off when he came to take her