短文改错Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It wa
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Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movieabout mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was such poor that she had to send him to a rich manwho had none child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,which is an old lady.He didn't care too much about him,for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness quiet,and on her bed the doctor fonund a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.
Everybody in the theatre was moved.
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Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movieabout mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was such poor that she had to send him to a rich manwho had none child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,which is an old lady.He didn't care too much about him,for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness quiet,and on her bed the doctor fonund a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.
Everybody in the theatre was moved.
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Last week I went to a movie,which was very (touching).It was a sad movie about (加入a) mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was (so) poor that she had to send him to a rich man who had (no) child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years (later) he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,(who) (was) an old lady.He didn't care too much about (her),for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness (quietly),and on her bed the doctor found a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He (去掉had) wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.Everybody in the theatre was moved.
Last week I went to a movie,which was very (touching).It was a sad movie about (加入a) mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was (so) poor that she had to send him to a rich man who had (no) child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years (later) he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,(who) (was) an old lady.He didn't care too much about (her),for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness (quietly),and on her bed the doctor found a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He (去掉had) wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.Everybody in the theatre was moved.
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