高分求一段英语文章的批阅Semi-closed bay and close to the mainland as Jia
高分求一段英语文章的批阅
Semi-closed bay and close to the mainland as Jiaozhou bay is,it was never frozen in history.But due to land reclamation in recent society,the volume of sea water is decreasing sharply,which also weaken the ability of heat storage of the bay.Such factors has made Jiaozhou bay frozen recent years,And construction wastes and household garbage used for land reclamation have also polluted the seawater,which made fishery industry along the coast suffered a lot.The presence of OCEANSCRAPER is to solve such problems.It will replace land reclamation.People can build buildings directly on the seabed now.In this way,we can avoid problems caused by land reclamation,such as frozen sea and pollution.
指出有什么问题,和正确的写法（全篇,不要只改一句或者一个词）.
Semi-closed bay and close to the mainland as Jiaozhou bay is,it was never frozen in history.But due to land reclamation in recent society,the volume of sea water is decreasing sharply,which also weaken the ability of heat storage of the bay.Such factors has made Jiaozhou bay frozen recent years,And construction wastes and household garbage used for land reclamation have also polluted the seawater,which made fishery industry along the coast suffered a lot.The presence of OCEANSCRAPER is to solve such problems.It will replace land reclamation.People can build buildings directly on the seabed now.In this way,we can avoid problems caused by land reclamation,such as frozen sea and pollution.
指出有什么问题,和正确的写法（全篇,不要只改一句或者一个词）.
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Semi-closed bay and close to the mainland as the Jiaozhou Bay is,it was never frozen in history.But due to the land reclamation in recent years,the volume of the sea water is decreasing sharply,which also weakens the ability of the heat storage of the bay.Such factors has made the Jiaozhou Bay frozen recent years,And the construction waste and household garbage used for the land reclamation have also polluted the seawater,which makes fishery industry along the coast suffer a lot.The presence of the Ocean Scraper is to solve such problems.It will replace the land reclamation.People can build buildings directly on the seabed now.In this way,we can avoid such problems caused by the land reclamation as the frozen sea and pollution.
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