一小段英语文章求改错!求大神帮忙看看语法,单词拼写之类的语病.大小写之类的不用,感谢!可加悬赏this comic st

一小段英语文章求改错!
求大神帮忙看看语法,单词拼写之类的语病.大小写之类的不用,感谢!可加悬赏
this comic strip is one piece.It has been lasting for 15 years. the cartoonist creates a wonderful world for people who is Adventurous .through this comic,i learnt that everyone needs a dream and fights for it.you should Never give up hope and keep an optimistic heart in any time.Remember,Always face life with a smile.