kevin83320
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As (a) basketball fan,I like Yao Ming best.He is 2.26m tall and (weighs) 134kg.In 2002,he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket.He trains every day in order to (improve) his skills.His performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad.He never gives up.He once said,"(On) the court,what I think (is) only how to play well,no matter who the opponent is." He is also a man (showing) love and sense of responsibility for society.He once donated a lot (of) money to a child who had leukemia.His success tells us (that) we should do everything as (possibly) as (we) can.I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
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