一下是一篇英语短文改错,请指教答案,并给出考点,以后再遇到应该如何让思考.

一下是一篇英语短文改错,请指教答案,并给出考点,以后再遇到应该如何让思考.
I have just moved to new house on Jefferson Street.Yesterday,two beggars Knocked my door.
They ask me for a meal.In return for this,one stood on his head and the other sing songs.I gave them some food,and they ate everything besides the cheese.
Then they put the peaces of cheese in their pockets,and they all left.Later my neighbor told me about them.
Anyone knows them.Their names are Jennifer and Percy Buttons.He call at every house once a month and always asking for some food.
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bent47 幼苗

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moved to a,knocked at,asked me ,sang songs,everyone,calls at ,asks for.
主要是时态错误和短语搭配

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请详细一点，请给出每一句话哪里出错了，错在哪里，怎样解析，谢谢。

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I have just moved to new house on Jefferson Street。这句中掉了冠词，句意为刚搬进一新屋。 Knocked my door。。。敲门固定搭配knock at They ask me ...很明显整个事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时，asked the other sing songs。。。这里sing 也是过去式，原因同上 He call 。。。上文提到的是两人，故此处应是他们敲门。they call at always asking ...主语是他们they,此处应为always ask.

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您好~~我觉得您是不是少写了几个 besides改成except besides 和except的区别 they all 改成they both 因为只有两个人，两个人全部用both always asking ...主语是他们they,此处应为always asks ,您这里少加了个S 还有 anyone knows them 这句anyone应该改为everybody因为这里指所有的人，更加的准确。

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moved to a, knocked at, asked me , sang songs, everyone, calls at , asks for.............
主要是时态错误和短语搭配请详细一点，请给出每一句话哪里出错了，错在哪里，怎样解析，谢谢。I have just moved to new house on Jefferson Street。这句中掉了冠词...

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I have just moved to the new house(这里是特指的新房子 所以最好加上定冠词the) on Jefferson Street.Yesterday,two beggars knocked my door.
They asked(过去式) me for a meal.In return(不用加for this),one stood on his head and...

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