一篇英语短文改错,英语好的请进.

一篇英语短文改错,英语好的请进.
That Saturday when I entered in an underpass,I ___
heard a beautiful sound.It makes me very happy.___
It was darkness there so I couldn't see where the sound ___
came from.I walked towards the corner.An old man was sitting ___
there,wears shabby clothes.He was playing Erhu.Oh,"it was ___
a beggar's",I thought.At that moment a man came by,dropped ___
one yuan in the beggar box.The old man stopped to ___
say "thank you".He then groped on the ground.___
While he found the box,he picked up the money.He ___
felt it and smiled.What beautiful the music was!It was ___
played by a blind person.I just admired him.___
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独行知猪侠 幼苗

共回答了26个问题采纳率:92.3% 举报

1 去掉 in
2 make--made
3 darkness--dark
4 towards--to
5 wears--wearing
6 a--the
7 beggar-- beggar's
8 对
9 While--After
10 What --How
11 对

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荷浪 幼苗

共回答了39个问题 举报

1去掉in; 2 makes--made 3 darkness--dark 4 5 wears--wearing 6 was--is 7 beggar's--beggar 8dropped 前面加and 9 beggar--beggar's 10 music 后面加 it
我按照自己找的错误改的,你标出的不是每行都有一个错误

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meteorcyclone 幼苗

共回答了418个问题 举报

That Saturday when I entered in an underpass,I __去IN_
heard a beautiful sound. It makes me very happy. __made_
It was darkness there so I couldn't see where the sound _dar...

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