野鹤zaihu
幼苗
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首先,个人感觉whether后不能直接加名词,像本句中,如果一定要用whether,后面应该加一个in,这样就感觉比较符合语法和语感
其次,感觉这个句子翻译的过于中式化,可以适当的把相应的顺序转换一下,感觉更地道一些,当然 只是拙见,仅供参考,呵呵
试译:
Severe inspection will be made by professional quality control Inspectors on the products both in the processing and in assembly,up to the moment they leave the factory on time,completely meeting the customer's requirements.
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